Month: March 2023

Writing Challenge Level 4

One day I was scrolling on Tiktok just to see someone that looks so familiar. Just to realise that it is my Teacher Mr Wisemen dancing on Tiktok. But the thing was he was famous, like really famous his video got over 100k views with 10k likes.But it was odd cause he got viral just for his bold head shining so bright as like the sun was on his head and saying “Having a bald head is life” holding taro in his hand and dancing.The Next day he came to school with a party hat but his bold head was still shining so bright even more brighter then ever .He was so happy he went viral he kept on dancing the whole day and eating taro.

 

Zacamariah

One day, There was a man and his name was Zacamariah. He had big ears,brown eyes,bald head,liked adventures and also loved dogs. Zacamariah was a very energetic man who always loved playing around and playing with dogs. Zacamariah had a dog named  pani popo, pani popo and Zacamariah was just exactly the same. They both were energetic and had big ears,brown eyes and Loved adventures, But one day things changed.

 

One day Zacmariah wanted to go for a walk with panipopo,So Zacamariah got things pani popo would need for a walk,When they were walking Pani popo and Zacmariah saw a map hanging onto a pole, Zacmariah looked and said “What have I found here” with a curious voice,He look onto the paper and saw that it was a map,It was leading somewhere far aways but still wanted to follow it so he decided to following the map.On their way there they were getting tired but kept on pushing,”phew” said Zacmariah with sweat coming past his eyes “Were here Pani popo” Panipopo jumped with excitement,It’s a cave. They walking into the cave Pani popo started to bark “What do you want Pani popo” Said Zacamariah, Pani popo was trying to point to the view ahead, Zacamariah looked ahead of him “WOW” Zacamariah’s mouth dropped I have never seen anything so beautiful Zacamariah felt like he was in a magical fairytale but it was real,He didn’t regret.Suddenly Zacharias blad head was glowing so bright it was like the sun was shining..Luna and Zacamariah had a wonderful adventure,But they had to go home so they went home,As they were going home Zacamariah had fun today with Pani popo.When they got home they went shower then right to sleep.The next day they wanted to go on another adventures.

Writing Challenge Level 4

One day,I decided to go to the beach to go and relax for a bit, So I got a big towel and a hat with a big bow on it and sunscreen.I got to the beach set my things up right in front of the sea and  laid down. All of a sudden I get swept away by a big wave it happened so fast and I couldn’t see cause my hat was in the way, Then I Hit My head and had passed out! .I woke up on a Island I had a pain in my head I felt dizzy as if I was sick!,It was dangerous, I got my hat ripped the bow off of it and tied it to my head,I Got up walking around not knowing where I am, Then I saw something shining bright as the sun hiding at the back of a coconut tree as I’m walking up to the coconut tree there was a infestation, It was BUGS! Carlwing around the tree! , I yelled AHHH! But I really wanted what was hiding next to the tree, So I Ignored the bugs and kept on going, I got to the box, It was very bright as daylight, I opened the box it had a Pacifier but not just any Pacifier, The Pacifier was a gold and royal blue Pacifier the top of the Pacifier and covered in gold just like from a movie, And the bottom was and lovely royal blue colour of  the sea. I was in shock so I took the Pacifier and i said I wish I was home, Then she teleported home The end.

 

Writing Challenge Level 4

Mr Moran,loved going to the beach on sunny days and going for a swim. One day Mr Moran had just bought a new diamond ring for himself. Suddenly a suspicious man came out of nowhere with a bat in his hand saying give me the ring,But Mr Moran jumped into the water to get away from him.The Mr Moran felt the ring slip off his finger, Mr Moran looked at his hands and saw that the ring was gone,Mr Moran got worried then the suspicious man through the bat at Mr moran but he missed, So Mr Moran through it back and it hit the man’s head and he fell hard on the floor. Mr Moran got even more worried so he swim to the man and because Mr Moran through the bat he wasn’t that hurt he was being dramatic and got back up.Mr moran pushed him into the water and got the bat and through it into the sea far far away so no one could get it, but the man couldn’t swim so Mr Moran had to help, So He Jumped into the sea and saved him the man said “Sorry you are my hero”, Mr Moran looked at the man’s fingers and saw that the ring slipped onto his finger and Mr Moran took it and said, May the world be kind to one another.  

 

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Helpful

Helpful 

Junior Journal 50

 

List the reasons why the children didn’t want to help Grandad in the garden. Use full sentences
1 Grandad, Would of been fussy about.
2 They hated gardening, Cause They would always get dirt under their fingernails and prickles in their hands.
3 They did want to garden cause They would get hot and sweaty also  their backs hurt because they had to bend over to pull out the weeds.
4 They also hated gardening because The spade and pitchfork gave them blisters.
5 They also didn’t like gardening because it was so hard to do.And you would need to put hard work into it.
6 It would also take a very long time for it to get done.

 

On page 28, why did the author write 

Dad shook his head

 Cause,In the book is say’s “Such a helpful child!”,And dad shook his head for feed back.

 

What did grandad do before he left the house? Grandad, Put his gardening hat on.

 

On page 29, why did the author write 

Vika beamed at him

 Vika opened her eyes wide at him and though his shoes. 

 

What was Kele doing when he waved at Matt? He was on his way to get a spade out of the shed.

 

On page 32, why did the author write 

He rushed straight to the gate before Grandad could change his mind.

 Grandad was letting him go to his friends house instead of helping grandad garden.

 

On page 32, why did the author write 

Dad laughed and patted Vika on the back.

 Vika didn’t want to help and told kele,Then kele got to go to his friends house and play and vika had to help.

 

WRITING ESSAY

Temalisi Auckland Essay

 

Auckland is the greatest city in the world.

Planning:

3 main ideas:

Martha’s Backyard

Rainbows End

Warriors

 

Auckland, best city in the world.Auckland is the largest city in New Zealand, with a population of 1.6 million.Martha’s Backyard is where you can find American lollies and food that you can’t find anywhere else. Rainbow’s End is a theme park in Auckland that attracts lots of attention from tourists.   The Warriors reached the Grand Final twice in 2002 and 2011, they were formed in 1995