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Writing Challenge Level 4

Mr Moran,loved going to the beach on sunny days and going for a swim. One day Mr Moran had just bought a new diamond ring for himself. Suddenly a suspicious man came out of nowhere with a bat in his hand saying give me the ring,But Mr Moran jumped into the water to get away from him.The Mr Moran felt the ring slip off his finger, Mr Moran looked at his hands and saw that the ring was gone,Mr Moran got worried then the suspicious man through the bat at Mr moran but he missed, So Mr Moran through it back and it hit the man’s head and he fell hard on the floor. Mr Moran got even more worried so he swim to the man and because Mr Moran through the bat he wasn’t that hurt he was being dramatic and got back up.Mr moran pushed him into the water and got the bat and through it into the sea far far away so no one could get it, but the man couldn’t swim so Mr Moran had to help, So He Jumped into the sea and saved him the man said “Sorry you are my hero”, Mr Moran looked at the man’s fingers and saw that the ring slipped onto his finger and Mr Moran took it and said, May the world be kind to one another.  

 

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Helpful

Helpful 

Junior Journal 50

 

List the reasons why the children didn’t want to help Grandad in the garden. Use full sentences
1 Grandad, Would of been fussy about.
2 They hated gardening, Cause They would always get dirt under their fingernails and prickles in their hands.
3 They did want to garden cause They would get hot and sweaty also  their backs hurt because they had to bend over to pull out the weeds.
4 They also hated gardening because The spade and pitchfork gave them blisters.
5 They also didn’t like gardening because it was so hard to do.And you would need to put hard work into it.
6 It would also take a very long time for it to get done.

 

On page 28, why did the author write 

Dad shook his head

 Cause,In the book is say’s “Such a helpful child!”,And dad shook his head for feed back.

 

What did grandad do before he left the house? Grandad, Put his gardening hat on.

 

On page 29, why did the author write 

Vika beamed at him

 Vika opened her eyes wide at him and though his shoes. 

 

What was Kele doing when he waved at Matt? He was on his way to get a spade out of the shed.

 

On page 32, why did the author write 

He rushed straight to the gate before Grandad could change his mind.

 Grandad was letting him go to his friends house instead of helping grandad garden.

 

On page 32, why did the author write 

Dad laughed and patted Vika on the back.

 Vika didn’t want to help and told kele,Then kele got to go to his friends house and play and vika had to help.

 

WRITING ESSAY

Temalisi Auckland Essay

 

Auckland is the greatest city in the world.

Planning:

3 main ideas:

Martha’s Backyard

Rainbows End

Warriors

 

Auckland, best city in the world.Auckland is the largest city in New Zealand, with a population of 1.6 million.Martha’s Backyard is where you can find American lollies and food that you can’t find anywhere else. Rainbow’s End is a theme park in Auckland that attracts lots of attention from tourists.   The Warriors reached the Grand Final twice in 2002 and 2011, they were formed in 1995  

Temalisi Auckland Essay

Temalisi Auckland Essay

 

Auckland is the greatest city in the world.

Planning:

3 main ideas:

Martha’s Backyard

Rainbows End

Warriors

Auckland, best city in the world.Auckland is the largest city in New Zealand, with a population of 1.6 million.Martha’s Backyard is where you can find American lollies and food that you can’t find anywhere else. Rainbow’s End is a theme park in Auckland that attracts lots of attention from tourists.   The Warriors reached the Grand Final twice in 2002 and 2011, they were formed in 1995

About me

Malo e lelei, My name Is Temalisi I am a year 8 student at Pt England school ,I am 12 years old turning 13, I love to play netball,tag and volleyball.I like play sports because it makes me happy.My favourite subject is reading books and doing maths, I have a lot of fun doing maths and reading. My favourite food is subway.My teacher for 2023 is Mr Wisemen.

Pourquoi tale

One day Their was a moon that would get very gurmy at times others would talk about him he wasn’t a very energetic moon he doesn’t like to be loud or annoyed, Then one day their was a fish that loves to get very cheeky to others and that was very energetic and annoying.

 

One day it was nighttime and it was dark and rain was pouring out of the sky , Fish didn’t like how it was raining he hates rain, Fish didn’t like how the moon was the spotlight when it was dark The moon would shine it’s gary light on to the sea but fish wanted the spotlight, Then fish went to his friends and started talking about moon, (fish)I hate the moon It always has the spotlight it shine right into the water (Fish’s friend) Just deal with it, say’s fish’s friend.

That night the moon heard that whole thing fish said.

 

The next day at night, The moon shined even more brighter then the day before, Fish got even more mad at looked at moon up in the dark sky saying why do you shine so bright can you like not because it’s like you want the spotlight for everyone to like you fish said. Moon got mad and couldn’t handle it, So Moon took fish, fish got scared he was wondering were he was then he realised were he is inside the moon, Fish was begging for forgiveness, But Moon didn’t replay.

Everytime fish would move the moon would always change shape, That how things are the way they are.